Reviews for Career Advice
| dragonlove |
2007.11.12 - 11:14PM |
1: Ginny Gets an Offer |
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| Totally crying and it is only chapter one!
I love the set-up and I totally adore the twins of Bill & Fleur.
I love that Ginny has her dream in front of her, I cant wait to find out what it is that she is looking for. |
| tgd |
2005.08.04 - 09:52PM |
1: Ginny Gets an Offer |
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| First chapters should:
- introduce characters
- introduce (or at least foreshadow) the primary conflict
- leave your curious enough to keep reading.
Certainly succeeds on points 1 & 3. As for 2 ... well, let's just keep reading, shall we? |
| Stormi |
2005.05.04 - 05:59PM |
1: Ginny Gets an Offer |
Anonymous |
| Nice start. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
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