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tgd 2005.08.04 - 10:02PM 2: Harry Gets an Offer Signed
Nice parallelism to Ch. 1. Could use *one more* coat of polish (repeat: Amateurs write. Pros rewrite), but this is very, very close. It certainly sets up the tension/conflict (when combined w/ Ch. 1) to carry a story.

pawsandfeathers 2005.05.05 - 09:52AM 2: Harry Gets an Offer Signed
Please continue with the story. My interest is piqued. Looks as if you have a good thing going here.

pawsandfeathers 2005.05.05 - 09:52AM 2: Harry Gets an Offer Signed
Please continue with the story. My interest is piqued. Looks as if you have a good thing going here.




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