Reviews for Career Advice
| tgd |
2005.08.04 - 10:02PM |
2: Harry Gets an Offer |
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| Nice parallelism to Ch. 1. Could use *one more* coat of polish (repeat: Amateurs write. Pros rewrite), but this is very, very close. It certainly sets up the tension/conflict (when combined w/ Ch. 1) to carry a story. |
| pawsandfeathers |
2005.05.05 - 09:52AM |
2: Harry Gets an Offer |
Signed |
| Please continue with the story. My interest is piqued. Looks as if you have a good thing going here. |
| pawsandfeathers |
2005.05.05 - 09:52AM |
2: Harry Gets an Offer |
Signed |
| Please continue with the story. My interest is piqued. Looks as if you have a good thing going here. |
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