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| tgd | 2005.08.04 - 10:19PM | 3: The Birthday Party | Signed |
| VERY good use of scene to propel the story and the conflict. Paints a very evocative word picture (especially the graf that has Harry walking in the front door, twins on each arm). Watch the adjectives - it occasionally borders on overuse; strong nouns are better. But that's a quibble - and thiis is a fine chapter. Excellent job of capturing Ginny's internalized feelings (the grabbinest towards babies; the wondering WTF Harry is *really* thinking). Strong work. | |||
| Melvacaea | 2005.05.17 - 06:42PM | 3: The Birthday Party | Anonymous |
| I'll be blunt: I. Demand. MORE. (Ha, gotcha didn't I? Thought I was going to say something mean and nasty, didn't ya? lol...) I love it. It's just so beautiful... and two new kids! More mayhem to the Weasley household! (*squeal* MORE!) -Mel | |||
| Stormi | 2005.05.13 - 04:43PM | 3: The Birthday Party | Anonymous |
| That is so touching. Please tell us that Harry and Ginny are going to have a heart to heart. Keep up the great work and write more soon please. | |||
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